Bumbling along
As the night sky rose like fire
And the iron angels
Stuck staccato like twigs on the ground
Propped up, reaching out to the masses
And I was on the train
With a man I’d never met
And his brother, wailing to the side
My heart was a rock
Falling through my chest
And they spoke to me
With malt liquor
Singing from their tongues
We spoke
Of God
Of writing
Of Love
And of loss
And he spoke of Hope
And he told me
To hold on
As bittersweet pills
Dissolve in the pit of my gut
He told me
To hold on
These were not the words
I was ready to hear
From slurred strangers on the train
But to speak of God
With a man
Who preached from a pulpit
Of worn plastic CTA seats
Is the closest
I have ever been
To a revelation
Amongst rocks
Amongst sand
Amongst water
Amongst twigs
And iron angels
Very well done.
That rang true. Nice!
Oooh ya – this resonates!
I love this poem–the rhythm of the train and those unexpected encounters with the Divine when we pay attention.